Hello, squiders!
Well, I’ve made it through the draft (again). I have made my maps, and they might actually be good. Well, they’ll at least be useful. (I do need to at least clean up the upper hold on the ship map, where I tried a couple of different combinations of rooms based off of in-book descriptions until I found one that made the most sense.)
(Also I moved a couple cities around on my continent map til I found places I liked them.)
(Also I discovered that the captain’s quarters moves decks kind of willy nilly throughout the draft, so definitely need to fix that.)
I’ve also made my chapter list, with notes about changes that need to be made, so I feel pretty good about getting going on the actual revision now. (Though I did a partial readthrough today, and noted a problem with how much supplies they had varying wildly, so I need to add that to my list.)
ANYWAY.
My in-person critique group is meeting on Sunday, like I told you guys last week, and I decided it wasn’t worth it to try and stuff a major revision in before then, so I’ve sent them the first draft of the first three chapters. I did do some minor editing–couple of typo fixes, a couple of continuity issues I’d noted that were easy fixes. But the hope is that we can see if the characters and plot are at least working before I re-write them and fix the old writing.
(The first chapter is from, oh, 2014 or something. I had these two characters and a basic storyline forever and ever and they were never gelling into an actual story, so I actually took them and used them for Hidden Worlds, assuming they never would gel. Fast forward five years after HW was published, and my brain was like, “Oh, what if we move the story into the same world as the Trilogy?” and BAM the whole thing gelled and that is the basis for World’s Edge.)
(Super annoying.)
(Anyway, when the story gelled, I made a whole bunch of notes and wrote the first chapter, and then went back to whatever project I was working on at the time. The rest of the book was written over 2019-2021. I think I told you guys that last week too.)
I did save some quotes I liked as I was reading through the draft. Who knows if they shall survive the revision, but here some of them are, in no particular order and with no context.
“I’m gonna set him on fire someday,” she confided. “But not on the ship, because that would be bad.”
Viri retrieved the other shovel, handing it to Marit, then shoved the remaining sword into her belt. “Happy exploring! Here’s to hoping there’s no death crabs.”
“No,” Ead said, his hands moving deftly as he worked. “When they don’t hurt, they itch. The itching may be worse. Oh, and it’s entirely possible we’re all going to die in a few hours, so that’s comforting.”
I do find myself in a bit of a conundrum though. Probably not worth it to start the revision until I get the feedback from my critique group, in case they point out something major. No reason to do it twice, amirite?
So what do I do until then?
I started a Victorian horror story back six months or so that I never finished. I should finish that, if only so I can close a couple of reference tabs I have open. I’ve been scribbling down short story ideas in a notebook lately, and in theory I’m doing a bingo challenge in one of my online writing communities, though I haven’t written anything for that.
Or I could take a few days off and read and draw and play video games. That’s tempting.
Probably should make a decision, but it’s getting late and maybe we’ll see how we feel in the morning.
How are you doing, squider? Up to anything interesting?